Proofreading

1. articles => a /an/the/some/any/ singular or plural (subject or object)
2. subject verb agreement => I go/ He goes
3. Tenses => active / passive
4. conjunctions => and, but, or, when, since
5. Prepostions => in, on, at, through, past, along, by
6. Parts of speech => noun, pronoun, adjective, adverb, verb
7. spelling
8. choice of vocabulary (collocation)
9. phrasal verbs
10. modal verbs (shall, may, might, could, can, will, would, should)
11. gerund or infinitive (swimming, to swim)
12. sentence structure

Narcolepsy

Narcolepsy is a neurological condition most characterized by Excessive Daytime Sleepiness (EDS), in which a person falls asleep during the day at inappropriate times, such as at work or school. A narcoleptic will most probably experience disturbed nocturnal sleep, which is often confused with insomnia, and disorder of REM or rapid eye movement sleep. It is one of the dyssomnias. A narcoleptic may also fall asleep at random.


Narcolepsy is characterised by sudden and uncontrollable attacks of sleep at irregular and unexpected times. Attacks may occur in the middle of a conversation or during a meal and can last minutes or hours.
http://www.bbc.co.uk/health/conditions/narcolepsy1.shtml

Rice-gas Comic

Rice-gas man has a dog. The dog is cute and clever. Rice-gas man trained him to play different acts. The acts include: giving hand to his master when asked, sitting down as requested, playing to be a dead person, and even attacking people when ordered.

The dog is so clever and he can act all the trained acts. But when it comes to job hunting, it is not easy. The dog also needs to send job application.

Rice-gas man's friend asked him, "What's wrong with the dog?" He said, " It has to start job-hunting now. Haha.."

Literature Question and Answer

Hattie ordered Ella to give her her mother's necklace. She wanted the necklace because she thought it was beautiful. She also liked to own the necklace that was highly treasured by Ella. Ella was very sad about losing the necklace that was one of the memories for her mother who had just died. This shows that Hattie was greedy and inconsiderate.